Critique
10/27/2015 08:56:22 AM Some lovely pictures!! You have demonstrated that you have investigated a photographer and responded by through adapting their style to fit your theme. This is excellent. You have mastered composition and experimented confidently with the depth of field.
Be careful not to make the colours in your photographs too vibrant. In what way could you develop your ideas further to add some kind of meaning behind your work? Consider how Slinkachu makes a statement of a political/opinionated nature
Mr Corkish
Response / Reply
In the future I will be careful when editing my photos, i will be more aware when adjusting the levels on the photos. I need to also need to develop a idea/theme for the miniature worlds project. I think I will develop a theme of different seasons and festivities. I will use autumn, winter, summer, spring, Christmas, Easter and other holidays. I think my photos could inspire people to get outside and enjoy nature.
Lottie Simpkins
10/27/2015 08:56:22 AM Some lovely pictures!! You have demonstrated that you have investigated a photographer and responded by through adapting their style to fit your theme. This is excellent. You have mastered composition and experimented confidently with the depth of field.
Be careful not to make the colours in your photographs too vibrant. In what way could you develop your ideas further to add some kind of meaning behind your work? Consider how Slinkachu makes a statement of a political/opinionated nature
Mr Corkish
Response / Reply
In the future I will be careful when editing my photos, i will be more aware when adjusting the levels on the photos. I need to also need to develop a idea/theme for the miniature worlds project. I think I will develop a theme of different seasons and festivities. I will use autumn, winter, summer, spring, Christmas, Easter and other holidays. I think my photos could inspire people to get outside and enjoy nature.
Lottie Simpkins