Very articulate writing with excellent use of key terms and refences to artists. Strong opening statement. To improve: check for the odd typo and grammatical errors. Explain the process of editing and provide screenshots to support your explanations.
My Response: I will go through and check all my spellings and grammar and i will also explain my editing process.
My Response: I will go through and check all my spellings and grammar and i will also explain my editing process.