Teacher Feedback: Critical analysis of your own work is really important in a flowing project. Make sure you have critiqued your own work using WWW/EBI/Next steps. Your project does develop in terms of where you are taking pictures (indoors/outdoors), but this does affect the white balance of your images. If you notice shoot 3 has a blue hue, whereas shoot 2 is warming in color. You should correct this in Photoshop or adjust the white balance (WB) on your camera and take a few test shots. The soldier shoots could be described as initial photo-shoots or experimenting with composition - make this clear on your website. A mind-map and mood board of influencing images would really aid in making your ideas clear (AO3). Move the Carl Warner research to a different page such as Photographers as this bears no resemblance or influence of your own work. Take your best photo-shoot, or the images that you think express your ideas the most accurately and refine them in Photoshop through tweaking color balance/exposure levels/contrast/framing etc. Present your final piece with a supporting statement explaining how you have achieved your aims.
My response: I have moved my Carl Warner to the appropriate page and i have added some more development of idea with a mind map and mood boards. I have conducted my final shoot, but i do need to uploads. I also added a critical analysis of an artist.
My response: I have moved my Carl Warner to the appropriate page and i have added some more development of idea with a mind map and mood boards. I have conducted my final shoot, but i do need to uploads. I also added a critical analysis of an artist.