FEEDBACK: Brilliant ideas! You have outlined your thoughts very clearly and support them with mindmaps and moodboards. You have described the process behind creating a joiner, but could model this through producing your own example. To improve further, ensure you have critically analysed a chosen example of work that inspires your ideas. Record a statement of intent to describe your what you are going to do for your photographic response.
STUDENT RESPONSE: I am going to complete my critical analysis on David Hockney's work. I also need to make a final decision of how I am going to develop my own ideas.
STUDENT RESPONSE: I am going to complete my critical analysis on David Hockney's work. I also need to make a final decision of how I am going to develop my own ideas.